Don't Let Go.

WALT: Write a narrative using dialogue.



Don’t Let Go!

Once upon a time, there was a woman trying to escape from the temple guards. All these weeks she’s been trying to escape, her name was Wendy. The day she escaped was yesterday night. As Wendy was in her cage she was thinking about how she can escape from the guards, at this point of time she had a pocket knife in one of her shoes.

Meanwhile, she started cutting the wooden sticks, it was also easy for her to break out. Wendy kept cutting until she got on her last one. Wendy crept out quietly without a sound. She then saw a carriage with the horses.
Wendy rushed to the horses smoothly.
All of a sudden the horses woke up making a lot of noises, Wendy went behind the carriage to hide from the guards as they were coming.

In addition, Wendy made her move. One of the guards walked away so the other one could deal with the horses. She killed the guard simultaneously! Wendy moved on to the other guard. She kicked him and cut his chest. She ran back to the carriage getting on the seat in front telling the horses to “hit the road”. They were rushing down the stairs, Wendy could n't see anything, back at the temple she left her shoe back at her cage.

This strange creature hopped on the carriage having a ride with Wendy. She didn’t know that a duck was on the front seat too, Wendy went flying still holding on to the ropes attached to the horses. She screamed with horror, her eyes were wide open, the lizard was holding on to one of the handlers on the side with one hand. Wendy was looking around to see where that noise was coming from, they were still rolling down the stairs.

“You look like a idiot with one shoe” said the lizard

“Hello, who was that” exclaimed Wendy. “How the hell did you get on”.

“Just keep looking forward and sit tight”.

“I can't, I'm still in the air, how do I get down?? Supposed Wendy.

“Why are you asking me, do I look like I know?

Wendy was thinking of how she could sit down. She had a smoldering intense face pushing herself towards the seat where the duck was sitting, meanwhile the duck was horrified when it looked back to Wendy. The duck screamed, Wendy managed to get on the seat. The lizard grabbed the duck and threw it away in the river, they were close to getting on the platform of the temple entry. As the lizard threw the duck into the river, the lizard laughed saying…

“Man that bloody duck was annoying”. “I would’ve killed that little duck for dinner”.

“Eeewww, disgusting”. “Why would you want to eat that?

“Because it looks delicious”. “Anyways, my name is Ben”.

They got off the carriage and headed somewhere to see if there was a shelter.

Wendy and Ben had to keep moving forward. In other words, there was no shelter? Wendy fell asleep to the ground feeling like she was knocked out! Ben was still looking forward. Suddenly, Ben looked to his right and saw Wendy on the ground. He looked if there was any help, but there wasn’t.

“I’m starving, we're never gonna find something to eat?

“Wendy. Wendy!! Oh damn, is she dead too. Well, I’m off”.

The next day Wendy woke up with a shocked face seeing the sun shining in front of her face. She then got up realizing that Ben was gone! What could have happened? Did the guards take him or something? Naahhhhh, they wouldn’t. If they did then they would take me so “yeah”.

Wendy continued her journey finding her way out of this strange place.

THE END.

The Young Detective.

Task Description: our class Room 1 literacy was writing a narrative. it was about (The Young Detective) we were told to finish the story off by writing it, as we were writing the story we had to highlight it black so it could show that it's our writing. After that we had to check if it had full stops and capital letters, we moved on peer editing which everyone did. All of us edited our partners writing.

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what was missing. As he was in the library he was still looking for what he had just then.

He kept wondering around the room looking for it. It was the missing piece to something? Adam looked back and saw weird eyes staring at him, he wondered what that was? He used his magnifying glass to see very well, the eyes looked like it was loose. Adam’s dad looked suspicious with him because he was staring at Adam the whole time thinking what he’ll do next. At that time he asked his dad if he knew where the key was.

The dad said “I don’t know what you’re talking about”

Adam kept on investigating for that key, it seemed like it was very special to him. Meanwhile, Adam’s dad grabbed him and hid Adam in his secret basement underground.

After that, Adam was stuck down there, he needed the key to get out, when it disappeared it went into the hands of the (Shadow Man) which was Adam’s dad.

He then bursted out the door with his magical powers, saying “What a pity.”

when he bursted out the door the Shadow Man dropped the key. In the basement Adam was trying to find a way to break out, he couldn’t. It was too hard for him.

He went towards the door to flip the switch on so that he could see properly, he saw a window and looked into the draws to see if there was a hammer, in the third draw he saw a hammer, he rushed to the window to smash it. Once Adam smashed it he ran after the Shadow Man to get the key, he stopped for a second.

He heard a sound rising, Adam looked back and saw the key he was amazed with his eyes, he didn’t know the Shadow Man dropped it when he bursted out of the door. As the Shadow Man was in the sky he had the summoning key in his hands, he was making the world turn into a weird world with abandoned places.

Adam was lucky enough to get the crossbow from the basement, he went outside getting a good aim at the Shadow Man’s head, in addition Adam missed getting his shots at the head multiple times. Adam made his last shot. The arrow shot his hands, as the summoning key dropped. He ran like he was about to catch the ball, like it was rugby.

At this point of time he had the summoning key, he had the missing piece to it.

Adam said “yes, I found the missing piece.”

He had to make this quick so this whole thing could end. After that, Adam put an end to this, to be continued...