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Tuesday, 11 February 2020

SEE - Explanation Writing.

S.E.E Statement - Explanation - Example


Picking Up Rubbish


The rubbish you pick up should go in the right bin so that we keep our environment
clean and to always be a tidy kiwi, the rubbish you have in your hand should go in the bin
that suits the rubbish, it’s better to put it in the right bin because it’ll get mixed up.
picking up 1 rubbish is saving 1 turtle. Picking up all the rubbish is saving the(turtles)


Chuck it in the right bin 


Always make sure to put it in the right bin because when there’s no rubbish on ground,
you might get forced to pick it up when you're around teachers, don’t let them tell,
just pick it up.
Lead by example to show others how it’s like to pick up stuff off the ground,
people should be responsible for picking up the rubbish off the ground, because it’s
there. Do not leave your rubbish because it’ll be dirty and ugly so i suggest we clean the
mess up.


Don’t just do it at school (home, streets)


The bad things you do or your bad behavior during lunch & morning tea,
morning time should stay at home, why? Because we need to stay active on our work so
that we can have a healthy brain, the bad stuff you do won’t at all, that’ll just put
yourself down and everyone else in the room. Just encourage others to do the right thing
at school, but the behavior you have should be at home, if you have a bad one that is.


Teach others (whanau, neighbors) 

It’s better to teach others the (Point England Way) it’s how it acts and sounds like,
it sounds like putting people up so that they can have the spirit to do the good stuff.
What it means to be at school, for example if someone walks past and sees someone stuck,
they should go and help that person, taking responsibility is one. It’ll help you to find a
way to set things right.

Task Description: So what we did is that me and my partner came up with some ideas to fill in the topic. As we were writing, we were struggling to find some ideas to fill the paragraph in, it took some time to finish this task, it has really helped us write about words that were interesting. We also added some detail to make our writing look neat and nice.

Friday, 18 October 2019

T4W1 Explanation Structure

How to be a good Son.

A good son is someone that helps their mother with the dishes or the garden at home. Are you a good son? It’s someone that’s a careful person that inspires people to be proud of themselves and their culture.

To me, it means that if you can’t make a change in your life then you could always find a way to fix and set things up for you. You just have to believe it, achieve it, become it. You could do all the things that you want to do. As you help and encourage others you’ll become more than yourself and that means your then your old self back then, For example, be the one that steps up and also be an example to all the people.
Lead and guide people to the right path ahead.

Take charge of yourself and the ones you love. Be responsible for your family and if things get all mucked up just face the consequences have faith in each other and share your highlight from a sport game you just had. Represent your family and yourself, be kind and appreciate the people that gave you stuff and be grateful too. For Instants, Have honesty with your parents because if you make a lie than that won’t be right for you because how are you setting an example for you and others.

My other reason why you should be a good son is that you have to always give respect to your parents. Especially when your outside playing with a rugby ball, when mum calls you, give her attention to what she will say. Just listen to the things that have been said by your older siblings including the rest of the family. As you get older and older you will do the same to your children too. And they’ll probably do the same like what you did back then when you were a child.

And their you have it. Three reasons why you should be a good responsible son. Would you do all the things that your would tell straight away? Are you (Responsible) enough to do all of this?

Wednesday, 28 August 2019

Explanation Writing.



Task Description: Room 1 literacy class did a explanation writing about a thesis statement. we had to write about Responsibility, Pets, Devices, and last of all was Chinese new years celebrating and performing a dragon dance. We had to write in every slide to complete this task so we could move on to the next one.