Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

Paragraph 1   

Introduction: What, When, Where and Who?                 

A hot friday morning it was 2016 school athletics day the bell rang. So we went to the courts Mr burt was in front of all of. Us and he

was ready to speak and he called the years and team house colours. But too much kids yelling and shouting then. We were all quite then he gave us some instructions.

Paragraph 2    

What happened during during the day? (House teams, colours, rotations)     

We went out to our events. The first event that we went to was high jump so we lined up into two

lines then. Mrs king said to us are you. Left or right but there were heaps on the right side. And I was on left.

Paragraph 3    

Choose one activity you did and explain what it was and how did you go?

Next was sprinting the first group went up first to line up. The second group lined up too but I was in arthur’s line so they standed up then. Mr burt said take your marks get set go so they ran as fast

as they can. Arthur was coming first but devontae was coming near arthur. But arthur and devontae were a tie so the next line came up on front.

Paragraph 4    

Conclusion: What was your favourite part? Highlight?          

My favourite part was high jump and sprinting and shot put too.

Water, Oil & Soap Quiz

The animal race.

Animal Racing!

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It is the 2016 Pt England animal race. This is not a normal race! In this race you get to ride whatever animal you want.    

Write a crazy story about this animal race that you and your friends had. Write about what animal you chose to race with and what animal your friends picked.

Then what happened during the race?

Did anything crazy happen?

Who won?

Start Writing Here: .It is the 2016 pt england animal race. It was a normal race and I chose the cheetah it was fast as. I was like YO I’ll have the cheetah and I saw the racers. With their animal then on that race the chicken lost like nothing.

‘’ Then we walked back to the start line and started again. Then the man said ON, YOUR, MARKS, GET, SET, GO.  Then the tiger was coming first again but it slowed down and then. I came first in that race.

‘The chicken was slow as the chicken said he was gonna come but I said your bloody lier. It didn’t even beat me. Cause I thought it was small but It was fat as. And I was like what the hell.

Then I walked away then this guy went to punch me then I went to drop him. Then after that I said to him don’t mess with me ghee okay yeah that’s right. That’s what I thought then I walked home to sleep.

THE END.

Crazy Motat Adventures

Some friends from school go to Motat with their teacher, but get lost inside of the museum. What kind of adventure do they end up on??...Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Planning Space

Beginning: (Characters & Setting)	Yr 4 & 5 going to the museum of transport and technology motat.
Middle: (Problem)	Me getting lost in a church.
End: (Fix)	Then the others find me in the church.

Start Writing Here:

On Tuesday morning I woke up and got ready to go on our trip. My brothers and I went to school. I thought I was late so I ran to school and I waited and waited until class was open. I gave my permission slip to Mr baxendine to put in the book bag. I then went to hang my bag on a chair and went outside to play. The two bells rang so I quickly ran to class and sat on the mat. Mrs Moala took us to the big mat.

Mr baxendine was doing the groups so I was the only boy In that group we went to the breeze and sat down. And gave us some Instructions and we were waiting for the buses to come then we went into the breeze and out of the breeze.

When we left out the breeze we went on to the bus and sat down in a chair and I was sleeping and then nytram was waking me up but he went away to sit somewhere else then. De niro was sitting next to me and well the bus was driving I was still sleeping and when I woke up I slept again.

And I woke up again and. De niro and I were talking to each other well the girls at the back talking, yelling, shouting, laughing and when we got there we went into the big white warm tent and this woman was talking us then we went out to do something fun but it wasn’t fun enough because the mirror maze wasn’t there.

Because they changed it to nothing and. When we went inside the room the woman was talking to us again but the group was somewhere else and It was boring but It was cool writing in our papers and then went outside to the big white warm tent.

Then went back to school and I thought it was lunch time but It was morning tea time.

The end.

Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

Paragraph 1   

Introduction: What, When, Where and Who?                 

A hot friday morning it was 2016 school athletics day the bell rang. So we went to the courts Mr burt was in front of all of. Us and he was ready to speak and he called the years and team house colours. But too much kids yelling and shouting then. We were all quite then he gave us some instructions.

      

Paragraph 2    

What happened during during the day? (House teams, colours, rotations)               

We went out to our events. The first event that we went to was high jump so we lined up into two lines then. Mrs king said to us are you. Left or right but there were heaps on the right side. And I was on left.

Paragraph 3    

Choose one activity you did and explain what it was and how did you go?                  

Next was sprinting the first group went up first to line up. The second group lined up too but I was in arthur’s line so they standed up then. Mr burt said take your marks get set go so they ran as fast as they can. Arthur was coming first but devontae was coming near arthur. But arthur and devontae were a tie so the next line came up on front.

Paragraph 4    

Conclusion: What was your favourite part? Highlight?            

My favourite part was high jump and sprinting and shot put too.

Start Writing Here:One day there were five little kids in a house named tank, richtofin, nikolai, takeo, and samantha the sister they all growed up into adults and the four men's got ready to do something it was to shoot the zombies and they went into the portal one at a time and then they were at this place could revelations there were maps all over the place it was up in the sky.

And they started with pistols there were perks too so they saw the apothicon tooked the pack- a- punch machine so they can’t pack-a-punch but they ran up straight to do the ritual so they started it and there were crawling fire monsters coming up to them and they shooted them and when they finished they started killing zombies they were shooting them to get more points.

And they were looking for the random box they were looking for the green light they saw it. It was at origins so they opened the door and the other door they jumped on the jump pad and ran to open another door then they all went to try the random box to get a gun first was takeo and he got the thunder gun and then tank tried and he got the tommy gun and then richtofin tried and he got the ICR and then nikolai tried then he got the apothicon servent.

So they killed the last zombie and they went up straight and open the door with their moneys and went down and they were at mob of the dead they went down the stairs saw the second ritual they started it and those crawling fire monsters came to them again then they shooted the crawling monsters then they finished the second ritual then they killed zombies to get more money than they saved the last zombie so they went in the portal.

And when they went in the portal they went to the beginning to go to der isendrache to do the third ritual so they went to jump in the jump pad and they landed so they buy the door and went up the stairs and they went up another stair and turned right and they saw the door and they buy it then they went up to started and they did they were shooting them again then the ritaul finished and they went to the last one.

So the last ritaul was at shangrila they went to shangrila and they all started the ritaul and the monsters came again and they finished the last one so nikolai went shoot all five tablets then all of them went into the apothicons mouth and pack-a-punch there guns and they survived longer and longer.

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