Crazy Motat Adventures

Some friends from school go to Motat with their teacher, but get lost inside of the museum. What kind of adventure do they end up on??...Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Planning Space

Beginning: (Characters & Setting)	Yr 4 & 5 going to the museum of transport and technology motat.
Middle: (Problem)	Me getting lost in a church.
End: (Fix)	Then the others find me in the church.

Start Writing Here:

On Tuesday morning I woke up and got ready to go on our trip. My brothers and I went to school. I thought I was late so I ran to school and I waited and waited until class was open. I gave my permission slip to Mr baxendine to put in the book bag. I then went to hang my bag on a chair and went outside to play. The two bells rang so I quickly ran to class and sat on the mat. Mrs Moala took us to the big mat.

Mr baxendine was doing the groups so I was the only boy In that group we went to the breeze and sat down. And gave us some Instructions and we were waiting for the buses to come then we went into the breeze and out of the breeze.

When we left out the breeze we went on to the bus and sat down in a chair and I was sleeping and then nytram was waking me up but he went away to sit somewhere else then. De niro was sitting next to me and well the bus was driving I was still sleeping and when I woke up I slept again.

And I woke up again and. De niro and I were talking to each other well the girls at the back talking, yelling, shouting, laughing and when we got there we went into the big white warm tent and this woman was talking us then we went out to do something fun but it wasn’t fun enough because the mirror maze wasn’t there.

Because they changed it to nothing and. When we went inside the room the woman was talking to us again but the group was somewhere else and It was boring but It was cool writing in our papers and then went outside to the big white warm tent.

Then went back to school and I thought it was lunch time but It was morning tea time.

The end.

Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

Paragraph 1   

Introduction: What, When, Where and Who?                 

A hot friday morning it was 2016 school athletics day the bell rang. So we went to the courts Mr burt was in front of all of. Us and he was ready to speak and he called the years and team house colours. But too much kids yelling and shouting then. We were all quite then he gave us some instructions.

      

Paragraph 2    

What happened during during the day? (House teams, colours, rotations)               

We went out to our events. The first event that we went to was high jump so we lined up into two lines then. Mrs king said to us are you. Left or right but there were heaps on the right side. And I was on left.

Paragraph 3    

Choose one activity you did and explain what it was and how did you go?                  

Next was sprinting the first group went up first to line up. The second group lined up too but I was in arthur’s line so they standed up then. Mr burt said take your marks get set go so they ran as fast as they can. Arthur was coming first but devontae was coming near arthur. But arthur and devontae were a tie so the next line came up on front.

Paragraph 4    

Conclusion: What was your favourite part? Highlight?            

My favourite part was high jump and sprinting and shot put too.

Start Writing Here:One day there were five little kids in a house named tank, richtofin, nikolai, takeo, and samantha the sister they all growed up into adults and the four men's got ready to do something it was to shoot the zombies and they went into the portal one at a time and then they were at this place could revelations there were maps all over the place it was up in the sky.

And they started with pistols there were perks too so they saw the apothicon tooked the pack- a- punch machine so they can’t pack-a-punch but they ran up straight to do the ritual so they started it and there were crawling fire monsters coming up to them and they shooted them and when they finished they started killing zombies they were shooting them to get more points.

And they were looking for the random box they were looking for the green light they saw it. It was at origins so they opened the door and the other door they jumped on the jump pad and ran to open another door then they all went to try the random box to get a gun first was takeo and he got the thunder gun and then tank tried and he got the tommy gun and then richtofin tried and he got the ICR and then nikolai tried then he got the apothicon servent.

So they killed the last zombie and they went up straight and open the door with their moneys and went down and they were at mob of the dead they went down the stairs saw the second ritual they started it and those crawling fire monsters came to them again then they shooted the crawling monsters then they finished the second ritual then they killed zombies to get more money than they saved the last zombie so they went in the portal.

And when they went in the portal they went to the beginning to go to der isendrache to do the third ritual so they went to jump in the jump pad and they landed so they buy the door and went up the stairs and they went up another stair and turned right and they saw the door and they buy it then they went up to started and they did they were shooting them again then the ritaul finished and they went to the last one.

So the last ritaul was at shangrila they went to shangrila and they all started the ritaul and the monsters came again and they finished the last one so nikolai went shoot all five tablets then all of them went into the apothicons mouth and pack-a-punch there guns and they survived longer and longer.

Room 9

TEST

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

One day It was a cold windy day two mens were In a house the two names were tyson and max they were playing games on the playstation 4 they were playing rugby league live 3 then when they finished playing they went out to kayaking on the river and It was night they went home to sleep In there beds.

Then the next morning It was a sunny day they waked up and made there breakfast and they ate It then they put It In the sink and went to there rooms and got toothbrushes and went In the bathroom and brushed their teeth then they went kayaking on the river again and they went for race tyson vs max they raced but tyson couldn’t beat max because max was too fast at kayaking then tyson said oh ok you win max you win.

Then at night they were still kayaking In the river and they saw something strange under the water they saw it closer then tyson and max said It’s a jellyfish box they went back fast to there stuff and got there kayak boats and put It on the top of the van and went back home when they got back home they said I’m never gonna go there anymore me too said max.

Sione Pick a Path story

Pick a path

Walt: write a story with different endings

1. Basic Plan - Outline of story

Story Plan - What is your story about?
Super Heroes? Aliens? Ghosts / Zombies? Adventure? Lost? Flood? Volcano?	A epic Dragon ball z battle between Goku and black goku Who are the Two main characters from the new dragon ball xenoverse.

2. Write your character description.

Remember this character is going to face challenges (problems) throughout the story.

Character Description - Who is your main character?
What do they look like? Short / tall? Fat / thin? Hair colour? Personality (happy, sad, friendly, shy?) Likes / dislikes?	Goku super saiyan god 2 hair colour was blue He is a protector of people he was angry and he’s tall skinny He has many powers including the kamehameha which is a blue powerful super blast.

3. Write your setting description.

Your story has to take place somewhere. (City, country, school, home, beach, park, shop)

Setting3. Write your setting description. Description - Where is your story taking place
Where is it? What can you see? What can you smell?	In the ground where the houses were goku smelled nice

4. Map out your ideas

If you map out your ideas now, it will work as a bit of a plan to follow

Beginning of story  - What happens first and what is the problem?
Goku fighting black goku in the ground
Fix 1 - What is the first way to fix the problem?					Fix 2 - What is the second way to fix the problem?
They were fighting in the ground					And they didn’t became friends because black goku’s evil.

Fighting the bad guy

One day there was a saiyan called goku he ate heaps and heaps of food then he went off to home but when he was there he had a fight Against black goku.

Then They fighted goku was punching his hardest to black goku but black goku was dogding it then black goku made a powerful blast out of his hand at the back of him

Then when he was fighting he was getting sucked in and he was getting angry then he got sucked in again then he went to another place

Where should goku go.

1. Should goku wait for him or
2. Should goku go to him and fight

Goku went to find but black goku was coping goku’s moves and he did a big massive wind to the big massive rock then goku found him and goku went up to black goku and punch him but black. goku dogded his punch and they were still fighting in the sky and they did there kamehameha’s in the same time black goku and goku did there kamehameha and they blast it and it bumped in and it made powerful boom! In the middle of it.

Then black goku was dead from goku because goku survived the kamehameha boom but black goku didn’t and then it was the end for black goku the end.