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Monday, 13 June 2016

Sione narrative will he save her

One dark night spider man was shooting his webs at loki then loki was making trouble but loki saw Spiderman shooting webs and spider man saw loki spiderman went to the top of the Building mary janes tried to help Spiderman but she was to late spiderman. Got Smashed by loki.
Mary janes got pushed off the building then spider man jumped and. Grabbed her then spider man Shoot His webs up at the top then put her. Down then spider man pushed loki off the building. Then loki
Was dead then spider man dropped off mary janes off to home. Then spider man went home too.

  

Thursday, 2 June 2016

Problem solving

Walt: double numbers.
One dark night spider man was shooting his webs at loki then loki was making trouble but loki saw Spiderman shooting webs and spider man saw loki spiderman went to the top of the Building mary janes tried to help Spiderman but she was to late spiderman. Got Smashed by loki.
Mary janes got pushed off the building then spider man jumped and. Grabbed her then spider man Shoot His webs up at the top then put her. Down then spider man pushed loki off the building. Then loki
Was dead then spider man dropped off mary janes off toWill He Save Her?
Narrative Writing

WALT: write a descriptive narrative (paints a picture in the reader's mind)

Use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. The picture could depict what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would then describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next.
Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that happened before this falling scene.
home. Then spider man went home to








Planning:
Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?
Beginning of the end
Hero:
Spiderman
Villain:
Loki
Other Characters (if any):
Mary janes
Setting: (Where?)
In the city
Problem: (What goes wrong?)
Loki push mary jane down the building
Solution: (How is the problem fixed?)
Spider Man jumped