School Hours Persuasive.

SCHOOL SHOULD START LATER AND END EARLIER

School should be normal. Because when you come to school, it’s just the same every day. Us kids should have more time to learn with, friends, teachers.

We should have more time to learn because if it starts later and ends earlier, then you won’t learn more. We could get smarter and smarter each day. As we go into college you'll see that you take things seriously. This is why we need to learn more. We can gain great knowledge too. Would you want more learning time at school?

Furthermore, my reason why we should go to school is because we need to know how to become a great smart student. In contrast, you learn unique things at school too.
My opinion is that we take these lessons so we know that you’ll have a better education in college. Science is one of the best subjects as well.

In addition, you could make a change in your life, and you could take charge of your own work, it’s like helping your friends doing their assignments. Or you could get them to help you. But that’s if your stuck with your work, even though it drives you crazy doing heaps of work, you could always find a buddy to help you.

Another reason why we should have more time is because it reduces the amount of time that children like us could be spending with their families. As you learn you will keep your brain active, and it boosts the connection within your brain too. And your brain can then apply that learning to other areas or problems. So, the more you learn, the better you get at learning.

CONCLUSION

I reckon we should have more time to learn about unique things.

Task Description: What we have learned about is that we had to create a document to do our school hours persuasive writing. we had to write our reasons, facts and also our opinion.

Blog Analysis.

Duffy Assembly Recount.

Hour of code. star wars

There was this cool special thing we did. We did coding because this guy named Nathan came and  told us about the technology of coding and then this girl came in with this strange bag.  She was called Mikayla and she told us about coding again. then we went off and did our coding for an hour. I did coding on the Star Wars game until the end.

Writing a story Once upon a time - with Elizah

Elizah and I wrote this story together about a kiwi that lost his PS4.

Addition/Subtraction

Final blog post 2016.

Final blog post 2016.

. favourite thing you did in 2016

. Thank you viewers for reading

. I will be back in 2017 so I can share more learnings

. Merry christmas

Sione Soap Report

1. One day on the beach shaun johnson was practicing his passes and tackles on the sand and then he left the ball in the sand and went to jump in the water then he didn’t know who was coming then he saw someone came out of the car and he who is that coming here he came down the steps it was jonathon thurston shaun johnson saw jonathon thurston playing with his rugby ball and he said to him your not allow to play with my ball.

2.Then johnathan thurston said back to him is it your ball said johnathan thurston yes that is my ball you should get your own ball not to use my ball then jonathon thurston said do you wanna challenge with at tackling and fast passes then shaun johnson said yeah I will straight beat you like nothing johnathan thurston said oh come on then they did fast passes first then tackling they passed fast as they could but shaun johnson won the fast passing.

3.Then It was time for tackling then they tackled but shaun johnson didn’t tackle because he was scared at tackling he was only good at passes and steps but jonathon thurston dived for the tackle he straight rapped around shaun johnsons leg as shaun johnson tripped over and fell In the sand then shaun johnson said okay you won and I lose then shaun johnson got up and he faced johnathan thurston to have another battle but jonathon thurston said just give up man.

4.But then two of them shaked hands and said are you all goods they both said yeah and then they changed back into their close and went to shaun johnsons house to play black ops 3 zombies revelations and they ate noodles and they became friends with each other then it was night time jonathan had a quick shower then he went back home too.

other then it was night time jonathan had a quick shower then he went back home too. shaun johnson he had a shower and then had dinner and then he went to his room to sleep.   

Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

Paragraph 1   

Introduction: What, When, Where and Who?                 

A hot friday morning it was 2016 school athletics day the bell rang. So we went to the courts Mr burt was in front of all of. Us and he

was ready to speak and he called the years and team house colours. But too much kids yelling and shouting then. We were all quite then he gave us some instructions.

Paragraph 2    

What happened during during the day? (House teams, colours, rotations)     

We went out to our events. The first event that we went to was high jump so we lined up into two

lines then. Mrs king said to us are you. Left or right but there were heaps on the right side. And I was on left.

Paragraph 3    

Choose one activity you did and explain what it was and how did you go?

Next was sprinting the first group went up first to line up. The second group lined up too but I was in arthur’s line so they standed up then. Mr burt said take your marks get set go so they ran as fast

as they can. Arthur was coming first but devontae was coming near arthur. But arthur and devontae were a tie so the next line came up on front.

Paragraph 4    

Conclusion: What was your favourite part? Highlight?          

My favourite part was high jump and sprinting and shot put too.

Water, Oil & Soap Quiz

The animal race.

Animal Racing!

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It is the 2016 Pt England animal race. This is not a normal race! In this race you get to ride whatever animal you want.    

Write a crazy story about this animal race that you and your friends had. Write about what animal you chose to race with and what animal your friends picked.

Then what happened during the race?

Did anything crazy happen?

Who won?

Start Writing Here: .It is the 2016 pt england animal race. It was a normal race and I chose the cheetah it was fast as. I was like YO I’ll have the cheetah and I saw the racers. With their animal then on that race the chicken lost like nothing.

‘’ Then we walked back to the start line and started again. Then the man said ON, YOUR, MARKS, GET, SET, GO.  Then the tiger was coming first again but it slowed down and then. I came first in that race.

‘The chicken was slow as the chicken said he was gonna come but I said your bloody lier. It didn’t even beat me. Cause I thought it was small but It was fat as. And I was like what the hell.

Then I walked away then this guy went to punch me then I went to drop him. Then after that I said to him don’t mess with me ghee okay yeah that’s right. That’s what I thought then I walked home to sleep.

THE END.

Crazy Motat Adventures

Some friends from school go to Motat with their teacher, but get lost inside of the museum. What kind of adventure do they end up on??...Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Planning Space

Beginning: (Characters & Setting)	Yr 4 & 5 going to the museum of transport and technology motat.
Middle: (Problem)	Me getting lost in a church.
End: (Fix)	Then the others find me in the church.

Start Writing Here:

On Tuesday morning I woke up and got ready to go on our trip. My brothers and I went to school. I thought I was late so I ran to school and I waited and waited until class was open. I gave my permission slip to Mr baxendine to put in the book bag. I then went to hang my bag on a chair and went outside to play. The two bells rang so I quickly ran to class and sat on the mat. Mrs Moala took us to the big mat.

Mr baxendine was doing the groups so I was the only boy In that group we went to the breeze and sat down. And gave us some Instructions and we were waiting for the buses to come then we went into the breeze and out of the breeze.

When we left out the breeze we went on to the bus and sat down in a chair and I was sleeping and then nytram was waking me up but he went away to sit somewhere else then. De niro was sitting next to me and well the bus was driving I was still sleeping and when I woke up I slept again.

And I woke up again and. De niro and I were talking to each other well the girls at the back talking, yelling, shouting, laughing and when we got there we went into the big white warm tent and this woman was talking us then we went out to do something fun but it wasn’t fun enough because the mirror maze wasn’t there.

Because they changed it to nothing and. When we went inside the room the woman was talking to us again but the group was somewhere else and It was boring but It was cool writing in our papers and then went outside to the big white warm tent.

Then went back to school and I thought it was lunch time but It was morning tea time.

The end.

Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

Paragraph 1   

Introduction: What, When, Where and Who?                 

A hot friday morning it was 2016 school athletics day the bell rang. So we went to the courts Mr burt was in front of all of. Us and he was ready to speak and he called the years and team house colours. But too much kids yelling and shouting then. We were all quite then he gave us some instructions.

      

Paragraph 2    

What happened during during the day? (House teams, colours, rotations)               

We went out to our events. The first event that we went to was high jump so we lined up into two lines then. Mrs king said to us are you. Left or right but there were heaps on the right side. And I was on left.

Paragraph 3    

Choose one activity you did and explain what it was and how did you go?                  

Next was sprinting the first group went up first to line up. The second group lined up too but I was in arthur’s line so they standed up then. Mr burt said take your marks get set go so they ran as fast as they can. Arthur was coming first but devontae was coming near arthur. But arthur and devontae were a tie so the next line came up on front.

Paragraph 4    

Conclusion: What was your favourite part? Highlight?            

My favourite part was high jump and sprinting and shot put too.

Start Writing Here:One day there were five little kids in a house named tank, richtofin, nikolai, takeo, and samantha the sister they all growed up into adults and the four men's got ready to do something it was to shoot the zombies and they went into the portal one at a time and then they were at this place could revelations there were maps all over the place it was up in the sky.

And they started with pistols there were perks too so they saw the apothicon tooked the pack- a- punch machine so they can’t pack-a-punch but they ran up straight to do the ritual so they started it and there were crawling fire monsters coming up to them and they shooted them and when they finished they started killing zombies they were shooting them to get more points.

And they were looking for the random box they were looking for the green light they saw it. It was at origins so they opened the door and the other door they jumped on the jump pad and ran to open another door then they all went to try the random box to get a gun first was takeo and he got the thunder gun and then tank tried and he got the tommy gun and then richtofin tried and he got the ICR and then nikolai tried then he got the apothicon servent.

So they killed the last zombie and they went up straight and open the door with their moneys and went down and they were at mob of the dead they went down the stairs saw the second ritual they started it and those crawling fire monsters came to them again then they shooted the crawling monsters then they finished the second ritual then they killed zombies to get more money than they saved the last zombie so they went in the portal.

And when they went in the portal they went to the beginning to go to der isendrache to do the third ritual so they went to jump in the jump pad and they landed so they buy the door and went up the stairs and they went up another stair and turned right and they saw the door and they buy it then they went up to started and they did they were shooting them again then the ritaul finished and they went to the last one.

So the last ritaul was at shangrila they went to shangrila and they all started the ritaul and the monsters came again and they finished the last one so nikolai went shoot all five tablets then all of them went into the apothicons mouth and pack-a-punch there guns and they survived longer and longer.

Sione Pick a Path story

Pick a path

Walt: write a story with different endings

1. Basic Plan - Outline of story

Story Plan - What is your story about?
Super Heroes? Aliens? Ghosts / Zombies? Adventure? Lost? Flood? Volcano?	A epic Dragon ball z battle between Goku and black goku Who are the Two main characters from the new dragon ball xenoverse.

2. Write your character description.

Remember this character is going to face challenges (problems) throughout the story.

Character Description - Who is your main character?
What do they look like? Short / tall? Fat / thin? Hair colour? Personality (happy, sad, friendly, shy?) Likes / dislikes?	Goku super saiyan god 2 hair colour was blue He is a protector of people he was angry and he’s tall skinny He has many powers including the kamehameha which is a blue powerful super blast.

3. Write your setting description.

Your story has to take place somewhere. (City, country, school, home, beach, park, shop)

Setting3. Write your setting description. Description - Where is your story taking place
Where is it? What can you see? What can you smell?	In the ground where the houses were goku smelled nice

4. Map out your ideas

If you map out your ideas now, it will work as a bit of a plan to follow

Beginning of story  - What happens first and what is the problem?
Goku fighting black goku in the ground
Fix 1 - What is the first way to fix the problem?					Fix 2 - What is the second way to fix the problem?
They were fighting in the ground					And they didn’t became friends because black goku’s evil.

Fighting the bad guy

One day there was a saiyan called goku he ate heaps and heaps of food then he went off to home but when he was there he had a fight Against black goku.

Then They fighted goku was punching his hardest to black goku but black goku was dogding it then black goku made a powerful blast out of his hand at the back of him

Then when he was fighting he was getting sucked in and he was getting angry then he got sucked in again then he went to another place

Where should goku go.

1. Should goku wait for him or
2. Should goku go to him and fight

Goku went to find but black goku was coping goku’s moves and he did a big massive wind to the big massive rock then goku found him and goku went up to black goku and punch him but black. goku dogded his punch and they were still fighting in the sky and they did there kamehameha’s in the same time black goku and goku did there kamehameha and they blast it and it bumped in and it made powerful boom! In the middle of it.

Then black goku was dead from goku because goku survived the kamehameha boom but black goku didn’t and then it was the end for black goku the end.