Showing posts with label Narrative writing work. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Narrative writing work. Show all posts
Monday, 11 November 2019
Wednesday, 6 November 2019
T4 W3 Choose It Narrative.
Once upon a time there was a Pirate crew at the ocean. They saw how the sky was dark, they were so tired and hungry because they were hunting for food, but found nothing. And thus they heard a noise coming from the sky, It was his crew coming back, he sent them to go hunt for food, but nothing was found. They landed together as a team telling their captain that there was no food.
The captain got angry and went inside to go to the toilets. This was a boring day for the Pirates.
On Wednesday they saw the sun shining out. They were shocked to see a duck and a dog on the ship. The captain said “GUYS LOOK!! There’s a gift from the gods, they have brought us a duck and a dog. They all woke up and rushed to see if it was true or not.
When they all came they fought it was dead, but it wasn’t. The duck was coughing because they got rushed by a bunch of seahorses. Then the Pirates said “HUH” I thought it was dead the captain exclaimed.
The duck got up and asked the Pirates “Where are we? The Duck asked. The captain said “Don’t act dumb, you’re going to be in my belly soon”. He laughed with his crew like an evil king.
The duck was walking around and saw his friend goofy. They seemed angry with the pirates, the dog said “want to play with these” and the Pirates said “What’s these?
DEEZ NUTZ IN YOUR MOUTH!! The dog shouted.
Go back to where you belong stupid animals, the Pirates proclaimed.
The captain said “BOYS LETS RUSH EM” yeah the crew shouted.
The duck and the dog was laughing hard out because they had no weapons, the dog said “I hope they taught you karate because I’m about to beat you up. The duck was like “YEAH”
After that, they found the shark and they killed when it appeared on the ship.
They had a feast inside their little house.
The duck and the dog killed the Pirates when they went to sleep, they enjoyed having fun, but you know this is how the story ends and the Pirates got thrown into the water. And the duck and his friend sailed to New York to see the beautiful statue lady liberty.
THE END.
The captain got angry and went inside to go to the toilets. This was a boring day for the Pirates.
On Wednesday they saw the sun shining out. They were shocked to see a duck and a dog on the ship. The captain said “GUYS LOOK!! There’s a gift from the gods, they have brought us a duck and a dog. They all woke up and rushed to see if it was true or not.
When they all came they fought it was dead, but it wasn’t. The duck was coughing because they got rushed by a bunch of seahorses. Then the Pirates said “HUH” I thought it was dead the captain exclaimed.
The duck got up and asked the Pirates “Where are we? The Duck asked. The captain said “Don’t act dumb, you’re going to be in my belly soon”. He laughed with his crew like an evil king.
The duck was walking around and saw his friend goofy. They seemed angry with the pirates, the dog said “want to play with these” and the Pirates said “What’s these?
DEEZ NUTZ IN YOUR MOUTH!! The dog shouted.
Go back to where you belong stupid animals, the Pirates proclaimed.
The captain said “BOYS LETS RUSH EM” yeah the crew shouted.
The duck and the dog was laughing hard out because they had no weapons, the dog said “I hope they taught you karate because I’m about to beat you up. The duck was like “YEAH”
After that, they found the shark and they killed when it appeared on the ship.
They had a feast inside their little house.
The duck and the dog killed the Pirates when they went to sleep, they enjoyed having fun, but you know this is how the story ends and the Pirates got thrown into the water. And the duck and his friend sailed to New York to see the beautiful statue lady liberty.
THE END.
Monday, 13 June 2016
Sione narrative will he save her
One dark night spider man was shooting his webs at loki then loki was making trouble but loki saw Spiderman shooting webs and spider man saw loki spiderman went to the top of the Building mary janes tried to help Spiderman but she was to late spiderman. Got Smashed by loki.
Mary janes got pushed off the building then spider man jumped and. Grabbed her then spider man Shoot His webs up at the top then put her. Down then spider man pushed loki off the building. Then loki
Was dead then spider man dropped off mary janes off to home. Then spider man went home too.
Thursday, 2 June 2016
One dark night spider man was shooting his webs at loki then loki was making trouble but loki saw Spiderman shooting webs and spider man saw loki spiderman went to the top of the Building mary janes tried to help Spiderman but she was to late spiderman. Got Smashed by loki.
Mary janes got pushed off the building then spider man jumped and. Grabbed her then spider man Shoot His webs up at the top then put her. Down then spider man pushed loki off the building. Then loki
Was dead then spider man dropped off mary janes off toWill He Save Her?
Narrative Writing
WALT: write a descriptive narrative (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
Use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. The picture could depict what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would then describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next.
Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that happened before this falling scene.
home. Then spider man went home toOr if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that happened before this falling scene.
Planning:
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Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?
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Beginning of the end
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Hero:
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Spiderman
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Villain:
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Loki
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Other Characters (if any):
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Mary janes
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Setting: (Where?)
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In the city
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Problem: (What goes wrong?)
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Loki push mary jane down the building
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Solution: (How is the problem fixed?)
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Spider Man jumped
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