The Young Detective.

Task Description: our class Room 1 literacy was writing a narrative. it was about (The Young Detective) we were told to finish the story off by writing it, as we were writing the story we had to highlight it black so it could show that it's our writing. After that we had to check if it had full stops and capital letters, we moved on peer editing which everyone did. All of us edited our partners writing.

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what was missing. As he was in the library he was still looking for what he had just then.

He kept wondering around the room looking for it. It was the missing piece to something? Adam looked back and saw weird eyes staring at him, he wondered what that was? He used his magnifying glass to see very well, the eyes looked like it was loose. Adam’s dad looked suspicious with him because he was staring at Adam the whole time thinking what he’ll do next. At that time he asked his dad if he knew where the key was.

The dad said “I don’t know what you’re talking about”

Adam kept on investigating for that key, it seemed like it was very special to him. Meanwhile, Adam’s dad grabbed him and hid Adam in his secret basement underground.

After that, Adam was stuck down there, he needed the key to get out, when it disappeared it went into the hands of the (Shadow Man) which was Adam’s dad.

He then bursted out the door with his magical powers, saying “What a pity.”

when he bursted out the door the Shadow Man dropped the key. In the basement Adam was trying to find a way to break out, he couldn’t. It was too hard for him.

He went towards the door to flip the switch on so that he could see properly, he saw a window and looked into the draws to see if there was a hammer, in the third draw he saw a hammer, he rushed to the window to smash it. Once Adam smashed it he ran after the Shadow Man to get the key, he stopped for a second.

He heard a sound rising, Adam looked back and saw the key he was amazed with his eyes, he didn’t know the Shadow Man dropped it when he bursted out of the door. As the Shadow Man was in the sky he had the summoning key in his hands, he was making the world turn into a weird world with abandoned places.

Adam was lucky enough to get the crossbow from the basement, he went outside getting a good aim at the Shadow Man’s head, in addition Adam missed getting his shots at the head multiple times. Adam made his last shot. The arrow shot his hands, as the summoning key dropped. He ran like he was about to catch the ball, like it was rugby.

At this point of time he had the summoning key, he had the missing piece to it.

Adam said “yes, I found the missing piece.”

He had to make this quick so this whole thing could end. After that, Adam put an end to this, to be continued...