Wednesday, 21 September 2016


Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.
One day It was a cold windy day two mens were In a house the two names were tyson and max they were playing games on the playstation 4 they were playing rugby league live 3 then when they finished playing they went out to kayaking on the river and It was night they went home to sleep In there beds.

Then the next morning It was a sunny day they waked up and made there breakfast and they ate It then they put It In the sink and went to there rooms and got toothbrushes and went In the bathroom and brushed their teeth then they went kayaking on the river again and they went for race tyson vs max they raced but tyson couldn’t beat max because max was too fast at kayaking then tyson said oh ok you win max you win.

Then at night they were still kayaking In the river and they saw something strange under the water they saw it closer then tyson and max said It’s a jellyfish box they went back fast to there stuff and got there kayak boats and put It on the top of the van and went back home when they got back home they said I’m never gonna go there anymore me too said max.

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