Wednesday, 15 March 2017

Year 5/6 camp writing.

Year 5/6 Camp - Writing

We are going to be writing about our camp experiences on camp.

Hook the reader in, and let them know what your writing is going to be about.
This writing is going to be about years five and six camp at pt england school.

Paragraph 1
What is camp. When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do?
Camp was started when. Mr burt was a teacher we year 5/6  had the opportunity to have camp at pt england school. And what did at camp for our activities was kayak but I don’t know when.

Paragraph 2
Highlights. What were your favourite parts, and why?
My favourite part at camp was the movies going to class to watch it we were all in different groups we were watching the storks that was so funny how the green bird said HOW YOU LIKE ME NOW, everyone was laughing Hard out I was gonna laugh too but I kept It In.

Paragraph 3
Thank you’s. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Teacher, and Leaders etc
Thank you Mr burt and teachers and leaders for organizing this year 5/6 camp at pt england school we all really appreciated that and another thank you to families too.

What did you learn about yourself on camp, why would you recommend that every student does this in future.
What I learned about camp was how to behave and learned how to kayak at the beach with the captains I was way behind all of them but I catched up to them. Then they ayyyy how did you get here so fast they said to me and I learned about how to play ping pong too that’s all I know.

Paste your finished writing here

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sione K you have a amazing Writing you did about camp you must had more fun then me at camp Sione K.