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Monday, 29 August 2016

Winning Gold!
WALT: create mood in our writing.

Topic: NZ Olympic Gold
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To share our thoughts on what it would be like to win an Olympic Gold Medal.


You have just won Gold at an Olympic Sport and are now standing on the podium receiving your medal. What feelings do you want the reader to get?

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Setting: Where are you? What is happening around you? What can you see? What can you hear?
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MakerBots & Drones
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:

I was at the Rio 2016 Olympic games the people are cheering and shouting Yelling and my coach too I can see the event In front of me I can hear the Man saying on your marks get set and he clapped It then I was running fast And I was racing Usain Bolt and I was catching up to Usain bolt but then I won.

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Events: What happened? What did you get given? What did you do as you stood there? How did you feel?
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MakerBots & Drones
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
I beat Usain Bolt in the 100 metre sprint then I’ve got given a gold medal then I was standing on the podium and I was being brave and strong then everyone was looking at me because I won the 100 metre sprint and felt so happy and excited joyful.






Name: Tiki
Icon 1: Warriors T-shirt
Icon 2: Rugby ball
Icon 3 (optional): Black boots

Describe what it looks like:

Tiki has two black rugby boots and warrior black short pants. And a red white black t-shirt and. Tiki is 11 feat tall.

Why is it unique to NZ?
Because everybody is unique to tiki the mascot. And other people.

What are its favourite things to do:
To play and spread joy.
He likes to jump and flip.
The most thing that he likes doing is weightlifting.
He loves to play volleyball.
And he is very fast.

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Woke up and ate breakfast.
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Brushed teeth.
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Super silent reading
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Literacy reading and writing.
11:00 am
Run then morning tea.
12:00 pm
Bell rang then maths in the other class.
 
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News lunch.
2:00 pm
Bell rang then we went to class.
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Bell rang then we went home.
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Afternoon at home doing some rugby training by yourself
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Nearly night time
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Night time shower.

 
7:00 pm
Playing wrestling in my bed.
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Still playing wrestling.
9:00 pm
My mum came back from church and had pizza for our dinner.
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Playing wrestling with my nephew i was randy orton and he was john cena.
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Then my unty came back from shopping and gave the children some mackintosh lollies and some fruit burst lollys.

 
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Woke up and had Breakfast and brushed my teeth.
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Walked to school.
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Playing in the courts then bell rang then class time. Then SSR
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Literacy reading and writing. 10:45 run time.
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Finish run morning tea then go out to play.
12:00 pm
Then bell rang we go in to lines and everyone came then mr goodwin came to but we didn’t get a ten we got 9.8 then we went in class to do some maths.

 
1:00 pm
We watched the news then after that the bell rang then it was lunch time we ate our lunch then mr goodwin said come on out to everybody So we can play.
2:00 pm
Bell rang the we lined up into two lines but then mr goodwin came with a apple eating it up then he throwed it in the bin he came but we didn’t get ten we went inside to do maths.
3:00 pm
Bell rang mr goodwin said good afternoon class then went home.
4:00 pm
We were at home changing our uniforms in our room then we went out to rugby training outside at my big feild.
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Then we went inside to shower then our friend came inside to have some bread then we played games in the play station 3 we played cod bo2 witch stands for call of duty black ops 2.
6:00 pm
Then my unty and cousin came back from the shops with fish and chips we ate it on a plate but my mum grabbed some chicken and some chips to take home with a plate on it.
 
7:00 pm
We walk with my mum and my friend to his house to eat then we went back home to watch karate kid and we were eating the chickens and i was drinking goldrush drink.
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Me and my brother made our beds and then we went to sleep.
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I woke up and had breakfast then i brushed my teeth.
8:00 am
I got ready to go school i was playing touch with lorenzo and the others
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The bell rang then we all went inside.
10:00 am
SSR for 20 minutes. Then ssr finished then letricy reading and writing. 10:45 run.
11:00 am
Finish run then morning tea. Finish lunch out to play.
12:00 pm
Bell rang then we went in two lines where our class was then we went inside to do some maths we did the quick 10.

 
1:00 pm
We watched the news then bell rang then lunch time we went out to play.
2:00 pm
Bell rang then we lined up in two lines where our class was then we were sitting up but we didn’t get a 10 so we went inside to do maths.
3:00 pm
Bell rang then home time.
4:00 pm
I showered then i finished showering.
5:00 pm
Then i had dinner.
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Then i went in the sitting room to play wrestling.

 
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Still playing wrestling
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7:00 am
Woke up and had breakfast then i brushed my teeth.
8:00 am
I went to school with my brothers.
9:00 am
The bell rang then we went to class to do SSR.
10:00 am
Literacy reading and writing at 10:45 run time.
11:00 am
Finished run then morning tea then we went out to play.
12:00 pm
Bell rang then we went into two lines then mr goodwin came then we went inside to do some maths.

 
1:00 pm
Lunch time we ate our lunch then we played sensible games.
2:00 pm
Bell rang then we went to grab our chromebooks to do maths whizz.
3:00 pm
Bell rang then home time.
4:00 pm
Back at home changing our uniforms then i went into the shower.
5:00 pm
Playing wrestling
6:00 pm
We had dinner.

 
7:00 pm
Then i made my brothers bed and mine too.
8:00 pm
Then we slept
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Still sleeping
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