Final blog post 2016.

Final blog post 2016.

. favourite thing you did in 2016

. Thank you viewers for reading

. I will be back in 2017 so I can share more learnings

. Merry christmas

Sione Soap Report

1. One day on the beach shaun johnson was practicing his passes and tackles on the sand and then he left the ball in the sand and went to jump in the water then he didn’t know who was coming then he saw someone came out of the car and he who is that coming here he came down the steps it was jonathon thurston shaun johnson saw jonathon thurston playing with his rugby ball and he said to him your not allow to play with my ball.

2.Then johnathan thurston said back to him is it your ball said johnathan thurston yes that is my ball you should get your own ball not to use my ball then jonathon thurston said do you wanna challenge with at tackling and fast passes then shaun johnson said yeah I will straight beat you like nothing johnathan thurston said oh come on then they did fast passes first then tackling they passed fast as they could but shaun johnson won the fast passing.

3.Then It was time for tackling then they tackled but shaun johnson didn’t tackle because he was scared at tackling he was only good at passes and steps but jonathon thurston dived for the tackle he straight rapped around shaun johnsons leg as shaun johnson tripped over and fell In the sand then shaun johnson said okay you won and I lose then shaun johnson got up and he faced johnathan thurston to have another battle but jonathon thurston said just give up man.

4.But then two of them shaked hands and said are you all goods they both said yeah and then they changed back into their close and went to shaun johnsons house to play black ops 3 zombies revelations and they ate noodles and they became friends with each other then it was night time jonathan had a quick shower then he went back home too.

other then it was night time jonathan had a quick shower then he went back home too. shaun johnson he had a shower and then had dinner and then he went to his room to sleep.   

Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

Paragraph 1   

Introduction: What, When, Where and Who?                 

A hot friday morning it was 2016 school athletics day the bell rang. So we went to the courts Mr burt was in front of all of. Us and he

was ready to speak and he called the years and team house colours. But too much kids yelling and shouting then. We were all quite then he gave us some instructions.

Paragraph 2    

What happened during during the day? (House teams, colours, rotations)     

We went out to our events. The first event that we went to was high jump so we lined up into two

lines then. Mrs king said to us are you. Left or right but there were heaps on the right side. And I was on left.

Paragraph 3    

Choose one activity you did and explain what it was and how did you go?

Next was sprinting the first group went up first to line up. The second group lined up too but I was in arthur’s line so they standed up then. Mr burt said take your marks get set go so they ran as fast

as they can. Arthur was coming first but devontae was coming near arthur. But arthur and devontae were a tie so the next line came up on front.

Paragraph 4    

Conclusion: What was your favourite part? Highlight?          

My favourite part was high jump and sprinting and shot put too.

Water, Oil & Soap Quiz

The animal race.

Animal Racing!

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It is the 2016 Pt England animal race. This is not a normal race! In this race you get to ride whatever animal you want.    

Write a crazy story about this animal race that you and your friends had. Write about what animal you chose to race with and what animal your friends picked.

Then what happened during the race?

Did anything crazy happen?

Who won?

Start Writing Here: .It is the 2016 pt england animal race. It was a normal race and I chose the cheetah it was fast as. I was like YO I’ll have the cheetah and I saw the racers. With their animal then on that race the chicken lost like nothing.

‘’ Then we walked back to the start line and started again. Then the man said ON, YOUR, MARKS, GET, SET, GO.  Then the tiger was coming first again but it slowed down and then. I came first in that race.

‘The chicken was slow as the chicken said he was gonna come but I said your bloody lier. It didn’t even beat me. Cause I thought it was small but It was fat as. And I was like what the hell.

Then I walked away then this guy went to punch me then I went to drop him. Then after that I said to him don’t mess with me ghee okay yeah that’s right. That’s what I thought then I walked home to sleep.

THE END.

Crazy Motat Adventures

Some friends from school go to Motat with their teacher, but get lost inside of the museum. What kind of adventure do they end up on??...Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Planning Space

Beginning: (Characters & Setting)	Yr 4 & 5 going to the museum of transport and technology motat.
Middle: (Problem)	Me getting lost in a church.
End: (Fix)	Then the others find me in the church.

Start Writing Here:

On Tuesday morning I woke up and got ready to go on our trip. My brothers and I went to school. I thought I was late so I ran to school and I waited and waited until class was open. I gave my permission slip to Mr baxendine to put in the book bag. I then went to hang my bag on a chair and went outside to play. The two bells rang so I quickly ran to class and sat on the mat. Mrs Moala took us to the big mat.

Mr baxendine was doing the groups so I was the only boy In that group we went to the breeze and sat down. And gave us some Instructions and we were waiting for the buses to come then we went into the breeze and out of the breeze.

When we left out the breeze we went on to the bus and sat down in a chair and I was sleeping and then nytram was waking me up but he went away to sit somewhere else then. De niro was sitting next to me and well the bus was driving I was still sleeping and when I woke up I slept again.

And I woke up again and. De niro and I were talking to each other well the girls at the back talking, yelling, shouting, laughing and when we got there we went into the big white warm tent and this woman was talking us then we went out to do something fun but it wasn’t fun enough because the mirror maze wasn’t there.

Because they changed it to nothing and. When we went inside the room the woman was talking to us again but the group was somewhere else and It was boring but It was cool writing in our papers and then went outside to the big white warm tent.

Then went back to school and I thought it was lunch time but It was morning tea time.

The end.

Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

Paragraph 1   

Introduction: What, When, Where and Who?                 

A hot friday morning it was 2016 school athletics day the bell rang. So we went to the courts Mr burt was in front of all of. Us and he was ready to speak and he called the years and team house colours. But too much kids yelling and shouting then. We were all quite then he gave us some instructions.

      

Paragraph 2    

What happened during during the day? (House teams, colours, rotations)               

We went out to our events. The first event that we went to was high jump so we lined up into two lines then. Mrs king said to us are you. Left or right but there were heaps on the right side. And I was on left.

Paragraph 3    

Choose one activity you did and explain what it was and how did you go?                  

Next was sprinting the first group went up first to line up. The second group lined up too but I was in arthur’s line so they standed up then. Mr burt said take your marks get set go so they ran as fast as they can. Arthur was coming first but devontae was coming near arthur. But arthur and devontae were a tie so the next line came up on front.

Paragraph 4    

Conclusion: What was your favourite part? Highlight?            

My favourite part was high jump and sprinting and shot put too.

Start Writing Here:One day there were five little kids in a house named tank, richtofin, nikolai, takeo, and samantha the sister they all growed up into adults and the four men's got ready to do something it was to shoot the zombies and they went into the portal one at a time and then they were at this place could revelations there were maps all over the place it was up in the sky.

And they started with pistols there were perks too so they saw the apothicon tooked the pack- a- punch machine so they can’t pack-a-punch but they ran up straight to do the ritual so they started it and there were crawling fire monsters coming up to them and they shooted them and when they finished they started killing zombies they were shooting them to get more points.

And they were looking for the random box they were looking for the green light they saw it. It was at origins so they opened the door and the other door they jumped on the jump pad and ran to open another door then they all went to try the random box to get a gun first was takeo and he got the thunder gun and then tank tried and he got the tommy gun and then richtofin tried and he got the ICR and then nikolai tried then he got the apothicon servent.

So they killed the last zombie and they went up straight and open the door with their moneys and went down and they were at mob of the dead they went down the stairs saw the second ritual they started it and those crawling fire monsters came to them again then they shooted the crawling monsters then they finished the second ritual then they killed zombies to get more money than they saved the last zombie so they went in the portal.

And when they went in the portal they went to the beginning to go to der isendrache to do the third ritual so they went to jump in the jump pad and they landed so they buy the door and went up the stairs and they went up another stair and turned right and they saw the door and they buy it then they went up to started and they did they were shooting them again then the ritaul finished and they went to the last one.

So the last ritaul was at shangrila they went to shangrila and they all started the ritaul and the monsters came again and they finished the last one so nikolai went shoot all five tablets then all of them went into the apothicons mouth and pack-a-punch there guns and they survived longer and longer.

Room 9

TEST

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

One day It was a cold windy day two mens were In a house the two names were tyson and max they were playing games on the playstation 4 they were playing rugby league live 3 then when they finished playing they went out to kayaking on the river and It was night they went home to sleep In there beds.

Then the next morning It was a sunny day they waked up and made there breakfast and they ate It then they put It In the sink and went to there rooms and got toothbrushes and went In the bathroom and brushed their teeth then they went kayaking on the river again and they went for race tyson vs max they raced but tyson couldn’t beat max because max was too fast at kayaking then tyson said oh ok you win max you win.

Then at night they were still kayaking In the river and they saw something strange under the water they saw it closer then tyson and max said It’s a jellyfish box they went back fast to there stuff and got there kayak boats and put It on the top of the van and went back home when they got back home they said I’m never gonna go there anymore me too said max.

Sione Pick a Path story

Pick a path

Walt: write a story with different endings

1. Basic Plan - Outline of story

Story Plan - What is your story about?
Super Heroes? Aliens? Ghosts / Zombies? Adventure? Lost? Flood? Volcano?	A epic Dragon ball z battle between Goku and black goku Who are the Two main characters from the new dragon ball xenoverse.

2. Write your character description.

Remember this character is going to face challenges (problems) throughout the story.

Character Description - Who is your main character?
What do they look like? Short / tall? Fat / thin? Hair colour? Personality (happy, sad, friendly, shy?) Likes / dislikes?	Goku super saiyan god 2 hair colour was blue He is a protector of people he was angry and he’s tall skinny He has many powers including the kamehameha which is a blue powerful super blast.

3. Write your setting description.

Your story has to take place somewhere. (City, country, school, home, beach, park, shop)

Setting3. Write your setting description. Description - Where is your story taking place
Where is it? What can you see? What can you smell?	In the ground where the houses were goku smelled nice

4. Map out your ideas

If you map out your ideas now, it will work as a bit of a plan to follow

Beginning of story  - What happens first and what is the problem?
Goku fighting black goku in the ground
Fix 1 - What is the first way to fix the problem?					Fix 2 - What is the second way to fix the problem?
They were fighting in the ground					And they didn’t became friends because black goku’s evil.

Fighting the bad guy

One day there was a saiyan called goku he ate heaps and heaps of food then he went off to home but when he was there he had a fight Against black goku.

Then They fighted goku was punching his hardest to black goku but black goku was dogding it then black goku made a powerful blast out of his hand at the back of him

Then when he was fighting he was getting sucked in and he was getting angry then he got sucked in again then he went to another place

Where should goku go.

1. Should goku wait for him or
2. Should goku go to him and fight

Goku went to find but black goku was coping goku’s moves and he did a big massive wind to the big massive rock then goku found him and goku went up to black goku and punch him but black. goku dogded his punch and they were still fighting in the sky and they did there kamehameha’s in the same time black goku and goku did there kamehameha and they blast it and it bumped in and it made powerful boom! In the middle of it.

Then black goku was dead from goku because goku survived the kamehameha boom but black goku didn’t and then it was the end for black goku the end.

PES Olympics Wheelbarrow Race!

WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

Topic: PES Wheelbarrow race

Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.

Purpose: To retell our Pt England School Wheelbarrow Race and share our thoughts on technology and cheating.

Room 9 has just completed the PES Olympics wheelbarrow race. Apparently there was some cheating in the race? How did this cheating affect you and your race?

Paragraph Options:

I was nervous.  Then Mr Baxendine said ready get set go  and I was coming first then I came second Sione was the one who came  first. Because mr baxendine was cheating In the race.

When we walked to somewhere we did something we saw the wheelbarrow. And we went Inside the Breeze then we had a wheelbarrow race. Mr baxendine was using the. Wheelbarrow and devontae was In It and when we started the race mr baxendine cheated then me and my friend came second place And the girls were laughing then I said to mr baxendine you. Cheated on the wheelbarrow race. Then we Went to go sit. On the step and it was time for the girls race then mr baxendine was using the Wheelbarrow again and calais went In It then the other girls were. In the floor then the boys said five Four three two one go then mr baxendine was coming first but he was cheating then the other girls Dropped down then mr baxendine. Crossed the finished line but the boys said you cheated again mr baxendine and we went to class to do some writing about the wheelbarrow race.

People uses steroids and motors to be good and people use drugs to win all their medals.  a lady got banned from the Olympics for using  a lot of drugs and she got sent to jail for lying to the host that she was using drugs.and this girl was using her twin sister to win are gold medal and the host noticed that a girl had a broken leg so she asked her twin sister to win the medal for her and she got banned from the olympics. Then their is a technology There's something called a motor. Are motor is something that makes your bike fast.

 I felt very scared and I thought then I got angry at mr baxendine for cheating he used the wheelbarrow. Then I got nervous that I was going to get in trouble Then  I was happy because I got to use the wheelbarrow and I came first and everyone was cheering.